Our first rough edit of the piece proved a helpful in the way of giving a more focused direction. The approach we took to the project to begin with was a very open one as we believed this would be the most effective way to meet the demands of the brief and although we did come up with a lot of effective material we also produced some less so effective footage. This first edit gave us chance to reflect on how were going about the project and gave a feel for what direction to head in, as well which of our original ideas to pursue and which leave behind. After this first edit we saw that it was most definitely necessary, to reign in the piece and make sure the focus remained clear although we wanted to keep a lot of the experimental vibe of the first we also felt it imperative to routine in what we shot as to keep the audience tapped into the main ideas and not be distracted by innovations which are not entirely linked to the core of the production.

On the whole believe our production was successful, we had a strong original idea to begin which transformed many times along our production journey experimented with ideas. However once we play around with ideas and settled our eventual product we picked the best our experiments in film making and planned them more precisely which I believe has had a positive effect on our final piece. Although we had shoot some scenes on four or even five occasions we persivered and eventually arrived at a destination we felt fitting.